Tuesday, May 3, 2022

Editing, Updating, and Completing a Manuscript

 

By Kathryn Lane

Technology innovations are accelerating at warp speed. At least that’s what it seems like in my writing world.

A year-and-a-half ago, I started research about a child math prodigy interested in rockets and space travel. The story takes place in the present day. The plot revolves around a family-secret type mystery and a subplot involving the girl’s dream of space exploration.

Then my commitment to write another novel in my Nikki Garcia mystery series shelved the girl-genius project.

Recently I took up the prodigy manuscript again and realized that maybe I should re-do my research since space travel has changed – several ordinary citizens have flown to or near the Kármán line – an imaginary but practical boundary separating mere air travel from space travel. Blue Origin flew 62 miles above the earth’s surface and kissed the Kármán line while Virgin Galactic flew a bit over 50 miles, the altitude where the Federal Aviation Administration awards astronaut wings to crew members.

The real clencher is SpaceX’s flight to the International Space Station. The crew were civilians. These three events impact important details in my young girl’s story.

All of those events were anticipated in the manuscript. Yet now they’ve actually occurred and it’s possibly a game changer for me. I'm wondering if I should make several substantial edits. Not that those space companies will be mentioned specifically, but the accomplishments do impact the story.

I can leave the novel as it was originally conceived and not re-do my research or I can spend time rethinking and rewriting it. You, as writers, might tell me it’s irrelevant to update it since I’d never complete it if I keep revising for the latest space and scientific discoveries. That’s true, but these events have been groundbreaking. To ignore them would be the easy way out. Plus the developments of the past year should make a positive difference in the young girl’s story.

Regardless of whether I update or not, the novel is about three-fourths done. If I’m going to make changes, now is the time.

Has anyone else faced this issue? If you have any advice, please share it!

Kathryn's latest Nikki Garcia Mystery Thriller: Missing in Miami (available on Amazon)



About Kathryn

Kathryn Lane started out painting in oils and quickly became a starving artist. To earn a living, she became a certified public accountant and embarked on a career in international finance with a major multinational corporation. After two decades, she left the corporate world to plunge into writing mystery and suspense thrillers. In her stories, Kathryn draws deeply from her Mexican background as well as her travels in over ninety countries.

Visit my website at https://www.Kathryn-Lane.com

Photo credits:

All photographs are used in an editorial and/or educational manner

Earth Math by NASA 

Rocket Launch - Twitter

SpaceX's Dragon Capsule Docking with the International Space Station by NASA 


19 comments:

  1. Depending on when you set the story, I would feel cheated if it implied the story was current but it didn’t accurately reflect today’s world. Now, if you kept it in the ost like Sue Grafton did….

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    1. Anonymous Debra, what is the "ost"?~Anonymous TK

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    2. I don't know what "ost" stands for, except that in reading and writing, it means Out of School Time for school kids, which does not make sense in the Sue Grafton context above.

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  2. Anonymous today was Debra H. Goldstein commenting from a phone

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  3. Kathryn, glad to hear someone else is playing around with other genres! I agree with AD (Anonymous Debra) that you need to update the story. I had the same issue with a story about Pluto (when it was still a planet). ~ATK (Anonymous TK)

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    1. Thanks Anonymous TK (not sure why the BlogSpot is doing the "anonymous" thing! That was not on BlogSpot yesterday when I left a comment on your blog). I'm pretty much convinced that I'll have to change it! And every opinion really counts - thanks!

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  4. Kathryn, what do you want to do? I have a manuscript that I wrote at the turn of the 20th century. To change it would mean so much rewriting and I did considerable research. However, I think you have an outstanding opportunity because space flight is literally happening outside our front doors -- at least mine as I live in Las Cruces, and White Sands is just a hop skip and Hwy 70 jump away from me. Good luck with whatever you decide!

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  5. Donnell, thanks. I did not realize you live in Las Cruces - for sure space flight is in your backyard. I'm leaning toward changing it for the same reason TK mentioned she wrote a story when Pluto was still a planet. In my case, it will make the story a bit crisper and cleaner, I think.

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  6. I always consider my audience when I make a decision like this. Will your ideal reader enjoy a nostalgia piece, or will she want a more contemporary view? Whatever you decide, I know it will be beautifully written.

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    1. Saralyn, thank you. Considering the audience is great advice!

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  7. I haven't experience this so unfortunately I can't give any advice. Though, I see you've gotten some sound advice from others. Good luck!

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    1. Thanks, Debra. Yes, I've received outstanding advice!

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  8. Looking forward to reading whatever you decide!

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    1. Thank you, Lynn. I'm moving forward with updating the story - that's really best for the readers!

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  9. Kathryn, I feel your pain. I wrote the first book in my mystery series fifteen years before I had a chance to look for a publisher. By then, the opening chapter had to be updated from writing a letter to the FBI to sending an email. In the story's climax, Samantha had to find a phone booth to call the police. Technology moves so fast, I'm considering setting my next book in the Middle Ages.

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    1. Gay, using the Middle Ages as the time period sounds good. On a similar point, I was listening to the history of the Grimm Brothers' fairy tales last night and thought technology shouldn't reach fairy tales! Whatever we write will be impacted by new technologies!

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