The Stiletto Gang is delighted to welcome Julia Spencer-Fleming! We are huge fans so this guest appearance has us all a-twitter...if you haven't checked out Julia's books featuring minister Clare Fergusson and police chief Russ Van Alstyne, now's the time. Through the Evil Days, the seventh in this fantastic series, is on sale this November.
Dos and Don'ts of blending Mystery and Romance
I clearly remember the moment when I realized that the
romance subplot/second story of my mysteries had
become the plot/primary story: I had just given a talk to an enthusiastic group
at a bookstore, detailing how I work out
the twists and turns of the murder, how I use the harsh weather and rural
landscape to echo conflicts within the book, how the crimes highlights social
issues I feel strongly about. The it was time for questions. A well-dressed
woman's hand shot up. “What I want to know is,” she stood up for emphasis,
“when are they going to Do It?”
Well, then.
The tradition of including a romance within a mystery goes
way back – who among us hasn't swooned when Peter Whimsey finally got his
proposal to Harriet Vane right: “Placetne, magistra?” “Placet.” Or when
Deborah Knott finally realizes Dwight Bryant has been waiting for her
for years. Or when art thief John Smythe, battered and bruised, admits his love
for art historian Vicky Bliss? Can you recall the crimes in Gaudy Night, Rituals
of the Season and Trojan
Gold? I can't. But, boy, I remember those scenes.
So what have I learned in seven – soon
to be eight – books about the tortured, tempestuous relationship between
Episcopal priest Clare Fergusson and chief of police Russ Van Alstyne? Glad you
asked. Let me share with you my dos and don'ts of blending the genres:
DO take advantage of the long story arc. In a straight-up
romance, the hero and heroine need to find their “Happy Ever After” by the end
of the book (in the same way that the mystery has to be solved at the end in
crime fiction.) But in a series, readers get to follow the couple, sometimes
for years, as they get to know and love each other. When Russ and Clare meet in
In
the Bleak Midwinter, he's contentedly married and she's a brand-new cleric
in a brand-new parish. How they struggle and resist and succumb to their
feelings becomes a story that spreads out over seven books (and counting!)
DON'T play it safe. There's a lot of crime fiction where the
amateur sleuth meets the detective in book one, dates him in books two through
four, is engaged in book five and married by book six. Their big conflict is
usually that she's nosy and he's overprotective. Nice enough, but it doesn't
tend to make the heart race. A good romance has complications and obstacles and
hurdles galore for the lovers. In Hank Phillippi Ryan's Jane
Ryland books, her eponymous heroine and Detective Jake Brogan are
passionately in love right from the start. But if he's dating a reporter, he'll
be suspected by the department anytime anyone leaks a story to the press. And
if she's dating a cop, her hard-won career as a crime reporter becomes tainted
be perceptions of favoritism. They literally can't be seen together. But they
yearn to be together! What to do? Obviously, you have to keep reading to find
out.
DO use danger as an aphrodisiac. In Out of the Deep I Cry,
Russ and Clare are locked in the pitch-black
cellar of a derelict building. They have no weapons, no phone and the
place is flooding with freezing cold water. (It sounds a little bit like the Perils
of Pauline as I describe the scene, but trust me, it works.) Isolation and
the fear of imminent death break down their barriers and they kiss. Who
wouldn't? If the hero and heroine are going to be rubbing shoulders with bad
guys and putting themselves in harm's way, take advantage of it!
DON'T mess with reader expectations. When someone picks up a
mystery, she has a reasonable expectation that there's going to be a crime
(usually a murder) a series of clues, and a solution. When someone reads a
romance, she has a reasonable expectation that there will be a couple, they
will change and be changed by each other, and they will reach a Happily Ever
After (or at least a Happy-For-Now, with an option to upgrade.) There's not
much more disappointing than getting to the end of a mystery and not learning
Whodunnit. Or how. It's equally infuriating to root and cheer for a couple only
to have one of them die or leave town at the end. Elizabeth George, I'm looking
at you, here.
DO It. When readers have anguished and yearned and hoped
along with a couple for two, four, six books, they want to experience the
payoff. You don't have to have a play-by-play book with diagrams, but let's see
a few fireworks! Readers want to experience the big emotions in the other parts
of the characters' lives – anger, frustration, triumph – so it's natural to
want to be there for one of the biggest emotional events of all. And, after
all, unlike killing someone, it's something most of us have actual experience
with...
Julia
Spencer-Fleming's New York Times bestselling books have won multiple
awards, including the Anthony and Agatha, and have been Edgar and RT Reader's
Choice nominees. The next Clare
Fergusson/Russ Van Alstyne novel, Through
the Evil Days, comes out on November 5th. You can find Julia at
her website, her readerSpace, on Facebook
and on Twitter as @jspencerfleming. She also blogs
with the Jungle Red Writers.
Julia, we're so thrilled to have you here today! All best for the new book launch; as you know, I'm a huge fan and can't wait to read it. This post was informative as well because I've got a romantic thread running through my books. A few things for me to consider...
ReplyDeleteMaggie
Thanks so much for joining us today at The Stiletto Gang!
ReplyDeleteEvelyn David
So happy that you could visit us today. Totally agree with all your suggestions for romance in mysteries. At some point, in novels, TV, movies, if the writer doesn't get the couple together, the "will they/won't they" issue transforms into "who cares?"
ReplyDeleteMarian, the Northern half of Evelyn David
Thanks for having me, Stilettos! The reason I blend romance and mystery ultimately comes down to: that's what I most love to read. Perhaps I should add another DO - DO write what you love!
ReplyDeleteGreat tips, Julia!
ReplyDeleteMy question: Once they "do it", how do you keep the relationship tension alive? The main question has already been answered; what we've been waiting for has happened. I've read series (and seen TV shows, Moonlighting being the best example) where once that particular tension is removed, the story ceases to be interesting.
ReplyDeleteFor Russ & Clare, there was tension already inherent in the relationship - they are so different from one another in temperament, background, age, etc. And there was a major plot development - separation, followed by Clare's PTSD and mal-adjustment to returning home. Have I already answered my own question?
I'm reading Out of the Deep I Cry right now -- can't wait for THE KISS!! this series is just fabulous -- the village of Millers Kill is an added character. wish Clare and Russ were real so they could come to Saratoga and join us for the races.
ReplyDeleteonly anonymous because I can't figure out how to post otherwise! Valerie
DeleteJulia, This is such a terrific post. My sister and I discuss the romances in mysteries, and we've given up on series when the woman can't make up her mind, and we've given up on series when she dumps the perfect guy who truly admires what she does. Yes, if you're going to put a romance in a series, expect the readers to care.
ReplyDeleteRoballen - I think you answered your own question! There has to be more to the story than "will they or won't they" for the story to survive the couple getting together. Personally, I think the pair from Moonlighting could have had a fabulous and interesting story carrying on past when they "did it" but the showrunners didn't follow through.
ReplyDeleteI love this post and the teases that you presented...I'm going to download the first book in the series.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the new title!
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